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Hi Frances, Your poem is very interesting with a convincing tone of voice and diction are also impressive. Just little things that you might pay less attention here is the ...

Hi Sakura, I think this story is too short and just give some information at a glimpse / brief on some of the events that you create here. A lot ...

Hi Queenprincess2001, this is quite interesting to read. Written in a relatively short sentence structure but still can bend the readers. I think, I oftentimes read stories like this. Mysterious ...

Hi SJ, Dream with review on your poem. This poem was successful in terms of the theme with effective diction. These words are often used in poem with the theme ...

This is the first time, I attempt to review your songfic. Excuse my lack in this review if there is any. The story seems suits with the selected song. I ...

Hello seeker742, mr.dream with review on your poem. The first thing I see, is the title of a poem that is quite odd and unique with a triple question marks. ...

Hi SlushySlapped, I just can't past without giving a little 'gift' in your poem. Crawling from the depths of my stomach, these feelings seep into my heart.* Taking me by ...

Hi Lumi, Dream with review on your poem. So I try to learn every poetic verses of your poem. Honestly, I still strive to be in the level that you ...

Hi Storygirl95, Dream with review on your story. The first thing that impressed me in the story is an interesting writing style. Plot of the story also goes well with ...

Hi questcrewforever, Dream with review on your story. As for me, you have a good idea in your story. You can still expand this story in the next chapter. I ...

Hi Sleeplessend, Dream here with review on your story. I see the narrative style of the story you are trying to portray. Including figurative language especially simile and metaphor, which ...

Hi EnigmaticSpirit, Dream here with review on your story. First of all, Happy Review Day! In this chapter, the story begins with a few quotations that have an impact on ...

Hi D4RKR4VEN, Dream here with review on your story. First of all, Happy Review Day! I have to say, you have a very good story with exciting description and detailed. ...

Hello XxKaixX, Dream here with review on your story. First of all, Happy Review Day! I begin my review of the understanding with this chapter, the main character is a ...

Hi Imaginator17, Dream here with review on your story :). Not difficult to understand the purpose of your story because it has a contrived plot story, as well as the ...