DrammaMomma

Hi there. A short and simple poem:) Short poems like this makes it easy for readers to read it. :D However, I feel there are some mistakes. Consumed in my ...

Hi there. A simple poem. Maybe you could add in more into this poem? It's kind of... Plain? No offense. Besides that, I feel that you have some errors and ...

Hi there. Firstly, good attempt, however, no offence, but it's not one of the best poems I've read. I feel that you've got some mistakes here however and I've underlined ...

Hello there! I feel that this is a pretty different poem, from the ones I have been reading. The use of " Old English " here is what makes it ...

Hello there! I felt that this is a really touching poem... I've had dogs too, who had passed on. Thank you, for this poem, which manages to bring out that ...

Hi there! A cool, simple poem. Not much words, but lots of meaning. I like the way you twist the phrases around. It's a clean poem, unlike other really deep ...

Hi there! Your poem is great, in a sense that it has rhythm and flow. I do like how the Sun and the Moon is put into the poem. (: ...

what is this day? that i say why it is school what other place? Hmm, I don't really understand when you use the phrase "what other place". I feel, that ...