Dragongirl

Ok, let me see if I've got this right.... there is Goku, Chichi, Gohan, Goten, Pan, Videl, Vegeta, Bulla, and Bulma, all in the first chapter. I'm not against having ...

Wow, good job. The first two verses were very nice. They both had rythm and rhyme. The last verse though seemed a tiny bit choppy. Alone I weep, I cannot ...

Weird...... I like it. :) The poem reminded me of something Dr Suess would write. One part I didn't really get(well.. I really didn't get the whole poem.;)) but one ...

Funny. I like how the person in this keeps heading back to the fridge. Reminds me of my self. "Pages on the floor...slipped today...almost broke my back." This seened a ...

I loved it! Such a sad sweet story. I didn't think it was a bit creepy. It was an easy read and well written. The only thing that I was ...

Good job. I think this is a really neat idea for a story. The one thing I don't love is how fast Calypso seems to gives up. Then she decides ...