Dragonet

Thanks for the reviews guys, they were both really helpful.

Wow, that looks really complected. How long did it take for you to do that?

This is really, really cool! My little brothers thought that it was done by a professional. So, yeah, really awesome. But I do think you did the words a little ...

This is totally unrelated to you story (sorry), but Oh. My. Gosh. the guy in your first picture, Vlad, looks exactly like a guy I know. It gives me shivers ...

Really you guys, I was just messing around here. I know that it's not real poetry, I wasn't even trying. I just decided to post it just so that I ...

Ok guys, thanx for all the help. This may sound really dumb, but I didn't even think about the characters being to perfect, I guess my plan was to make ...

Shubhilove2write- No, I do not have a prologue, this is where it starts. Crescent- The part that I cut out is now the second chapter (it's in romance fiction if ...

OK you guys, I took servant4christ's advice and made it shorter. I'd like to thank everyone who commented (apparently no one else agreed to my challenge :( ) oh well. ...

Ok, so I realize that this is kind of long (ok so maybe it's really long) but that's the way chapters are supposed to be, right? I have a challenge ...

This is good. I'm really curious, so hurry up and write more! :D

I fixed the name problem.

:lol: i love it!

First of all, sorry about the name, I decided to change the spelling of the name from Kenyah to Kenya, but as you may have guessed I forgot to change ...

I know this piece needs some help, so feel free to criticize.