DragonWriter

I love these books, and the second is called blade of fire. !SPOILER! I loved how it opoened up with a wolf pepol attack. That was a pretty awesom fight ...

I Read the series a few weeks ago, and well, I found it quite enjoyable. However, there are meny better vampire books out there. Umm, really cannot say anything more ...

This serise is the bomb. Well almost. But honestly, it has too meny twists in it. i mean you need to take series notes the first time reading if you ...

Great! Aboslutely wonderful! Umm, but somethings wrong! It is not finshed. So put on your thinking cap and get writting. lol, sorry about that, had to get it off my ...

like it, love it, want to marry the story, joking! but it is that good! laugh out loud, you probly think i am freak, but your stories, like, umm, rule!

Love it, love it. It was ecellent. Man, it was awesome. I cannot say enything, i am speechless. No idea on how to improve it. i change my last reveiw, ...

good points! The idea, so far, is unique and interesting. Your sentece structures are nice and the story flows smoothly. not so good points it was short. sugeatrions you need ...

it was a bit confusing. more later bye] \

I have edited,as best as i can with my limited abbilities.

Thanks you all for the crits. I will try to edit it soon, however i will be soon reading herry potter 7, so i will get to it tueday.

I absolutly, positivly love it. This is excellnt. I do not see anything wrong with the idea, the story, or grametical errors. Please Keep writing and working on this one ...

you need to get someone to look ovber it, I felt like the end was rushed. YOu allso had a few repeating words and some even missing.

I like it, and i love it. You know how bad I am at spelling so i cannot comment on that, but the rest was great. I absolutly loved the ...

it is good, but you know you can do better. editt and edit, and it will get better.

no fare , no fare. I absolutly refuse to think that admanda is dead. why did yhis happen in the first chappter. I hate you keeping the darn supppence. You ...