DragonGirl11

Hi there! DragonGirl11, here to review! I haven't read many screenplays before, but I have read a lot of scripts for stage, so I'll be making comments based on what ...

Greetings! DragonGirl11 at your service. I have to say, I adore this story. You really got me got me invested in the characters. Even Quirk, who seemed at the beginning ...

Oh wow! I'm going to follow you now. This is one of my favourite short stories on YWS, maybe even ever. It's well thought out and original. Did it actually ...

Hello freezingwreck! I'm DragonGirl11, and I'm here to review your chapter! I like the concept, and I look forward to seeing it continue. Most of the suggestions I have for ...

Hi writing! DragonGirl11, here to review! I don't read a lot of horror... ok, I don't usually read any, so I might find stuff really scary that's not scary at ...

Hey Kayfortnight! It's me again :D I'm not so good at reviewing poetry as prose, but here I go anyway. I definitely like this piece very. As someone who dances ...

Hi, Kayfortnight! I have to say, excellent piece here. You really painted the topic of unwanted animals, especially pit bulls, clearly and emotionally. Heartfelt is how I would describe it. ...

Hello there! I'm DragonGirl11 and I'll be reviewing your poem today :) I like the poem, I really do. You tell the first part of the most beautiful story on ...

Hello Brooke! Now this is a Twilight fanfiction I can enjoy! (Ok, technically not fan ...) It's not really in proper script form, but that's completely alright because it's a ...

Hello, North! All in all, your grammar, spelling, and punctuation are excellent, but I do have a couple nitpicks about the first three sentences. ...and walked through the door. The ...

Hello Si! I don't know if I've ever reviewed a piece this short before, so bear with me. Your title drew me in automatically, as I recognized it from the ...

Hey niniboutique! Welcome to YWS! I'm DragonGirl11, and I'll be reviewing your story today. First let me say that I really like the story. The Moon Girl is a really ...

Hello, Dingobabee! DragonGirl11, here to review! Ok, wow. You've got a good start here, a really good start, but with a little help from writing conventions, it could be all ...

Hey Cailey! I'm not much of a poetry reviewer, so bear with me. First let me say, this is really pretty :3 I really enjoyed the way it flowed so ...

Greetings, Satan. This is an interesting consept, I must say. What I see here, though, is a rough draft that could be worked into a very, very good story. I'd ...