Draculus

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Thank you very much for the review, Hkumar! As always, I'd been waiting for it loyally, and, as always, I am more than grateful for your kind words)

Thank you very much for the review and for the useful tips! I hope you'll want to read the previous chapters and comment on them as well)

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Thank you very much for your kind words and for noticing my grammar mistakes, too)) Sometimes I am a blind dwarf x) Hope you'll enjoy the following chapters as well)

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Maybe the riddle should be done in a special way so that it doesn't have any other words than the ones of your poem? It could be pretty hard to ...

(sorry for the codes) %u25D8 It took Ronald a while to know what the captain had said. to Know --> to Understand or to Comprehend Had is not really needed. ...

Thank you! So glad you liked it) I'm gonna try to make the next chapter(s) contain more dynamics and interesting, maybe funny details for readers to get more excited. I ...

Thank you very much for pointing out the mistakes, that was really helpful) And about the festivals, I've emphasized that the Brook Day is a few days ahead of the ...

Thank you very much! I'm working on the form of paragraphs, so I hope next chapters will be easier for you to read)

English is not my native language either, so I may be mistaken about the phrase about eyes. I just imagines eyes falling on something, and that scared me a bit) ...