Dracula

I loved your previous poem so I had to give this a read. I have two things I would like to point out which will help make this even better. ...

Hey, ITSLEWIS! A belated welcome to YWS. :) The one thing which stood out to me the most was your use of metaphors and similes. You've written a lot of ...

Yes. Yes. Yes. I agree with this one hundred percent. XD Delivery people seem to take so long to get anywhere, though I know it's not their fault. But it ...

Input on the prologue? Sure! I suppose you'd like to know what I think of the plot, right? Well, that's what I'll write about. :) One vital piece of information ...

Would it be like a regular summer camp? What made it so Greek? What made it so Greek? I had never even thought about that question, and it's sort of ...

Oh yes, I'm excited to read this! The Percabeth spawn... I'm interested to find out what you envision happening. As her blonde hair whipped across her face BLONDE HAIR! Annabeth ...

Heya, MeherazulAzim16! Welcome to the website. :D We are human beings. And it's in our nature to fear the unknown. It may not be the only reason but it's of ...

Hello, dearestperegrine! Welcome to the Young Writers Society! :D You're not related to an Alma Peregrine by any chance, are you? Your imagery is amazing; shatters on impact, scarlet streams, ...

Hey, Earendil, I'm here to review the best that I can. From all those stars you've got it must be obvious that your poem is pretty well touched up, and ...

Yay! I love it when people write about their dreams, this will be fun to read. And I'm interested in knowing what goes on in your mind. :P It was ...

WAIT. This is the end? That sucks. Well not really, I mean... CONGRATULATIONS! You just finished a big project and you did an amazing job! I'm just a little sad ...

Welcome to the Young Writer's Society!!!!!! Hopefully I didn't hurt your ears, that was pretty loud. :D I hope you love it here and will feel tremendous joy when you ...

So I thought I'd listen to the mp3 first, and for the first 30 seconds I was trying to fit the lyrics into the music myself. I didn't realise that ...

Hello, Lau! Here's a review for you, mostly I'll just look for nitpicks which need to be touched up. I opened the door to the apartment and rushed to the ...

I was a little confused at the beginning of the epilogue. I wondered who the new character was, but I think it's written perfectly. I saw her through the eyes ...