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Ooooh this is a fascinating story, I've never read anything from the perspective of Adam or Eve before! Initially I thought that it was from the perspective of Jesus Christ, ...

Hi, just giving some of my thoughts on your work! Starting with the good stuff, its definitely interesting. It grabbed my attention well, and I quickly felt immersed with the ...

(Ignore the other comment i left, accidently pressed submit before i typed anything lol) Before i say anything else, I've gotta say that i love this story. I found myself ...

Firstly, i want to say that this was a great read! It sucked me in quickly, and kept my attention throughout the entire story. It was easily understandably what was ...

Originally i was gonna critique Zhar'tok referring to themselves as an alien since we'd be the alien to them, but it actually makes sense since it's being presented to us, ...

Heya! First of all, I just want to say, although I can't say I was super surprised by the fact that the fairies were actually evil and had ulterior motives, ...

Just to start off, I want to say that I really enjoyed reading your story. It was easy to follow in my opinion, I understand what was happening at any ...