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Re: Consumed
(Ignore the other comment i left, accidently pressed submit before i typed anything lol) Before i say anything else, I've gotta say that i love this story. I found myself ...
Mar 26, 2025 -
Re: Chronicles of the Greater Galaxy: I Gaping Maw
Firstly, i want to say that this was a great read! It sucked me in quickly, and kept my attention throughout the entire story. It was easily understandably what was ...
Mar 23, 2025 -
Re: Chronicles of the Greater Galaxy
Originally i was gonna critique Zhar'tok referring to themselves as an alien since we'd be the alien to them, but it actually makes sense since it's being presented to us, ...
Mar 22, 2025 -
Re: The children: Bone Boy
Heya! First of all, I just want to say, although I can't say I was super surprised by the fact that the fairies were actually evil and had ulterior motives, ...
Dec 1, 2024 -
Re: Cold.
Just to start off, I want to say that I really enjoyed reading your story. It was easy to follow in my opinion, I understand what was happening at any ...
Dec 1, 2024
