DrLavender

Hey! Thank you deeply for your kind words, it means a lot! As for the sentence you quoted, yes, it was on purpose. I wanted to describe the car being ...

Hey Casanova! Thank you for your review, it really means a lot! Ah, I guess the problem with posting excerpts is that it will leave readers questioning all that you've ...

Hey Wolfie! Thank you for your review! Deeply appreciated! Haha, yeah I'll certainly drop the commas and semicolons which you pointed out. As for the last line you cited, you ...

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Hey Ashnirai! Thank you for your review, it deeply means a lot! You make a great point about me using scientific diction. I guess I wanted to have an elaborate ...

Hey Wolfie! Thank you for your review, it really means a lot! I've always had trouble with semicolons. I know that by definition, the clauses they're separating should be able ...