Doxie00

I like the way you went straight to the point when you started your story. I like the way the narrator's feelings can be imagined by a reader, the way ...

Oh a lovely poem ! :) I think it is just fine were you put it really :) Keep up the good work

Beautiful poem ! I love the tone...bland but still poignant ;) keep up the good work :)

Oh My Gee-Ow-Dee !!! That story is just amazing and fantastic ! I loved the plot...everything. But i admit i kinda got confused somewhere. Like, when the narrator does a ...

OMG!!!!!!!! when i read this poem, i thought i was looking at a portrait of my self, my own life. Girl do i feel you ! I know what you're ...

Wow. Omg. That, that was n amazing story. I could feel that little boy's pain. Is it a true story? Is it your true story? :/ If so...man i'm so ...

Well...i dont quite agree with you when you said that : "Some say love is the sensing,kissing, lips pressed together,holding, arms wrapped tight,smelling, drifting, lingering odors,feeling, hearts pou

Oh Myy!!! Aly you are SO talented!! :O You should be a writer some day man :3 Your story sounds so real; you describe the narrator's emotions quite well...(though maybe ...

OMG !!! When i read your poem, i felt as if you were talking to me. I like the repetition. I love the way you did your stanzas, the way ...

Its a very good poem. I especially liked the rhyming words i must say :) But dont forget: (like you told me) be careful with your punctuation..."cover*s* is" its supposed ...

WOw ! Your poem is beautiful. When i read it, it seemed to be coming from the seemed so real (that it even made me think of myself -_- ) ...