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I liked this poem. Not bad at al!! :) And this part made me smile: Damn the dreams I dream! Haha i liked that! ;=) Keep up the good work. ...

Wow! I Looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooved this poem!! :D And i must congratulate youu, caus ei dont usually read poems with that sort of structure -__- But yours was... Mind blowing! ^^ LoL. ...

Wow! That was... TOUCHING ! I really loved it! How awesomely sweet. :) Im sure you'll find her one day! Just you wait! ;)

Ohhhh! Nice! Its only at the very end that i understood you were talking of hte moon. -___- Haha! Nice one! At the beginning, i thought you were talking of ...

Awwww !! :D So first off, this story was quite short and well there wasn't much drama or intrigue as I first thought there would be. -__- But it was ...

I loved this story! From the first line i was hooked! :) Man i would soo want to know what's reallly wrong with him! Was it a tragedy of some ...

Awwwww I looooved this poem soooooo much!!!!!!! Wow i hope you do get this girl!It was so sweet! A guy who can express himself in such a beautiful way deserves ...

Waayyy to goo!! I loved this story! It was sad ! It must really hurt to lose the love of your life and to find yourself married to someone who ...

Wow! This poem speaks sooo much truth!! I really loved it! :D Im afraid i didnt spot any mistake worth correcting! xD Keep up the good work! :)

Okay so i really appreciated this poem! I liked the fact that it had an unexpected twist to it, and the way you described their conversation when he first approached ...

Okay so i must say that this was quite confusing. Like i had to read it atleast three times to understand -__- ...(But i admit, im also slow-minded u_u) The ...

Ouuuuuuh! This was GREAT! :D Im afraid i have no corrections to make! xD The last paragraph made me smile! :) I liked it very much! So I won't love ...

Nice story i must say! I think you could have described Justin and his relation ship with the narrator a little more, at the beginning of the story -__- ANd ...

Wow this was so touching! Beautiful story. Really sad. I liked the fact that you really managed to make your readers feel the narrator's pain. however, there was something i ...

Wow. Im speechless! -__- I loved it! Fabulous girl! :D I loved th way Stella keeps saying "i hate you" at the start of every paragraph. ANd how the emotion ...