DoodleNugget

Very nice writing! Very nice detail and description when it comes to the surroundings and the like. I enjoyed the metaphors and similes you gently inserted as well, this adds ...

Nice story. I don't know if this will be an overly helpful review, but I thought I'd share my thoughts anyway. I really enjoyed the way you inserted certain aspects ...

Wow! Great story, kept me on my toes. I could find few errors as I read, but that was probably due to the suspense I felt. I didn't expect the ...

This is an interesting piece. I enjoyed the fable-like aspect of it. It sounds like something you might come across while reading the Brothers Grimm. Anyway, I do have a ...