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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Action / Adventure Re: Take Me Home: Chapter Two: The Nectarine

    Well, let me start off with, "Wow!" I am astounded because that was wonderful. I am in love with this story, and I hope to see it continue because I ...

    Jun 1, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Take Me Home- Chapter One: How Charming

    This is an excellent start to a story. I love the ideas that are starting to develop in the story, and I love the plot line. I'm excited to see ...

    Jun 1, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Anywhere but Down

    I absolutely love this story. I love the realistic, emotional basis of the story, and it definitely caused me to keep reading it. The length of the story matched the ...

    Jun 1, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: Un-fufilling Realizations

    Okay, to start, this was very interesting. It kept me wanting to keep reading it, so that's the first thing I feel was done right. Personally, I think some descriptions ...

    Jun 1, 2013
  • Short Story » Humor, Fantasy Re: Laughing-Stock

    Okay, so in general, I really liked this. It was short and simple, kept my attention rather than making me wonder when it was going to end. The length appropriately ...

    Jun 1, 2013


[as a roleplayer is feeling sad about torturing her characters] GrandWild: "You're a writer, dear. Embrace it."
— GrandWild