Dhendon

Well, let me start off with, "Wow!" I am astounded because that was wonderful. I am in love with this story, and I hope to see it continue because I ...

This is an excellent start to a story. I love the ideas that are starting to develop in the story, and I love the plot line. I'm excited to see ...

I absolutely love this story. I love the realistic, emotional basis of the story, and it definitely caused me to keep reading it. The length of the story matched the ...

Okay, to start, this was very interesting. It kept me wanting to keep reading it, so that's the first thing I feel was done right. Personally, I think some descriptions ...

Okay, so in general, I really liked this. It was short and simple, kept my attention rather than making me wonder when it was going to end. The length appropriately ...