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Re: Pretzel Bites (1.)
Thank you so much for the feedback! I really appreciate it because I know how long it can take to read something and then go back to highlight areas for ...
Feb 19, 2022 -
Re: The 3 Little Pigs (Retelling) 1.
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts!
Apr 7, 2021 -
Re: The 3 Little Pigs (Retelling) 1.
Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm probably going to edit/add some more things in my next revision.
Apr 4, 2021 -
Re: The 3 Little Pigs (Retelling) 1.
Thank you!
Apr 3, 2021 -
Re: 15 Minute Writer's Prompt
Awww, thank you so much for the feedback, Carina!
Feb 1, 2021 -
Re: 15 Minute Writer's Prompt
Thanks so much for your feedback. I loved your suggestions. You weren't harsh at all
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: 15 Minute Writer's Prompt
Thank you!
Jan 30, 2021 -
Re: Yolk's on Me (3)
Thank you so much for the feedback! You made a good point. Mauve did get off easy
Jan 17, 2021 -
Re: Yolk's on Me (Ending)
Thanks for the feedback!
Jan 9, 2021 -
Re: Yolk's on Me (3)
Thanks for your review! Thumps are like little tapping noises. ^^ Yeah, Mauve just needs to realize other people would like her without the theatrics.
Jan 3, 2021 -
Re: Yolk's on Me (1)
Thanks again for the feedback! Super helpful
Dec 22, 2020 -
Re: Yolk's on Me (2)
Thank you so much for the feedback! I definitely needed another pair of eyes. I%u2019ll try to revise the info-dumpy parts. Glad you liked Mauve and her mom. There%u2019s going ...
Dec 22, 2020 -
Re: Yolk's on Me (2)
Thanks for the feedback!
Dec 15, 2020 -
Re: Yolk's on Me (1)
Thank you so much for your feedback! I appreciate it! Mauve%u2019s actually a sophomore. ^^
Dec 11, 2020 -
Re: Yolk's on Me (1)
Thank you! I%u2019m so glad to hear that. I was concerned about Mauve coming off as unlikable. ^^
Nov 30, 2020
