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  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: Pretzel Bites (1.)

    Thank you so much for the feedback! I really appreciate it because I know how long it can take to read something and then go back to highlight areas for ...

    Feb 19, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The 3 Little Pigs (Retelling) 1.

    Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts!

    Apr 7, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The 3 Little Pigs (Retelling) 1.

    Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm probably going to edit/add some more things in my next revision.

    Apr 4, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The 3 Little Pigs (Retelling) 1.

    Thank you!

    Apr 3, 2021
  • Short Story » Technology, Science Fiction Re: 15 Minute Writer's Prompt

    Awww, thank you so much for the feedback, Carina!

    Feb 1, 2021
  • Short Story » Technology, Science Fiction Re: 15 Minute Writer's Prompt

    Thanks so much for your feedback. I loved your suggestions. You weren't harsh at all

    Jan 31, 2021
  • Short Story » Technology, Science Fiction Re: 15 Minute Writer's Prompt

    Thank you!

    Jan 30, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Yolk's on Me (3)

    Thank you so much for the feedback! You made a good point. Mauve did get off easy

    Jan 17, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Yolk's on Me (Ending)

    Thanks for the feedback!

    Jan 9, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Yolk's on Me (3)

    Thanks for your review! Thumps are like little tapping noises. ^^ Yeah, Mauve just needs to realize other people would like her without the theatrics.

    Jan 3, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: Yolk's on Me (1)

    Thanks again for the feedback! Super helpful

    Dec 22, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Yolk's on Me (2)

    Thank you so much for the feedback! I definitely needed another pair of eyes. I%u2019ll try to revise the info-dumpy parts. Glad you liked Mauve and her mom. There%u2019s going ...

    Dec 22, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Yolk's on Me (2)

    Thanks for the feedback!

    Dec 15, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: Yolk's on Me (1)

    Thank you so much for your feedback! I appreciate it! Mauve%u2019s actually a sophomore. ^^

    Dec 11, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: Yolk's on Me (1)

    Thank you! I%u2019m so glad to hear that. I was concerned about Mauve coming off as unlikable. ^^

    Nov 30, 2020


Perhaps one did not want to be loved so much as to be understood.
— George Orwell, 1984