Derek

Just like 1 paragraph of chapter one Chapter 1 The Coming Sota was sitting on his bed studying. The final exams were coming up and he need to get the ...

No need to crit this anymore I wrote it as Elior Seris Book of Alarice Just find that in the fantasy section and comment on it instead This is no ...

Okay so i posted before this about a randomly generated storyline. This is the actual book chapter that feeds off that. Now this took me 2 days to type(surprisingly enough) ...

I know its a big change from the last one. I like it Althought its a big more touchy fealy ! Elior Series Book of Alarice (Book 1 of 3) ...

Revised Version Below!topic62008.htmlI hope you enjoy the Prologue of my newest possible work. I know some of you mightconsider this an info dump(cause it is?) but aren't most Prologue's! :]. ...

I hope you enjoy the Prologue of my newest possible work. Chapter 1 is coming very soon."Long ago in a time of war, the gods were fighting over dominion of ...

*******************PLEASE READ THIS FIRST*****************Before you read this, to be completely honest I hate it. Not the story, the plot, nothing like that. Just the writing. I think it's awful. I ...

I decided to put this in the Sci-fi section because this scene doeshave an extremely sci-fi feel to it. Once again, not really my best/favorite scenes but they're getting better. ...

After many novels gone wrong, or simply put on hold here I am. This is the first book I ever wrote. I made it when I was 13. Now after ...

Note: This is 2600 words, so be prepared for that. Little lengthy, but I'm proud of myself for making it so much longer then normal! This review will be a ...

Chapter 2Nostrum own viaThe familiar smell of the corn filled the air as the students unloaded from the buses. The sunset told them that the time had come for them ...

I am glad to say, I am really proud of this, despite the mistakes. I really love this chapter, definitely my favorite so far. I hope you all love it

Shorter then I wanted it to be, will probably flesh it out much later on, but overall I like it. Chapter 5Rage, For BeginnersThe lights shut off without warning. The ...

This was fun but so hard to write. I know it's not as good as it could be and it's shorter then some of the other chapters so I'll attempt ...

Really short compared to some of the others, I didn't want this one to be so long, but I feel it's still too short, defiantly needs a revisiting later.Chapter 9The ...

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Spoiler! : Something about this chapter is weird to me, after reading it. A little cheese, a little "unrealistic", which is surprisingly easy to do despite the fact that it ...