Demtry

Thank you for reviewing! I'm always hesitant to put punctuation because I like the words to be as bare/raw as possible, but it definitely gives it a different flavor. I'm ...

Ah thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :) I'll definitely be changing entrance to entry promptly, thanks for helping me with that :) .x

Thank you for reviewing! I'm not at all offended - I appreciate you taking the time to read my work :) I'll read it over a few times and see ...

Thank you so much for taking the time to review :) I think I will change entrance to entry, so thank you for that and maybe I'll substitute shivering with ...

Thank you, Tucker! Kyla also mentioned that punctuation in this poem might be a good idea and I'll definitely be thinking more about whether or not I should punctuate. I ...

That's a really interesting point! I was drawing from personal experiences from the poem, so I guess it makes sense with my emotions, the turmoil in the beginning and the ...

Thank you so much for taking the time to review! I was actually going back and forth for a bit whether or not I should punctuate, and it definitely gives ...

Thank you for taking the time to review my piece :) I don't really know what type of poem this would be considered, I usually just write free verse and ...

You made me think about a lot of stuff! Definitely revising this poem ^_^ I especially appreciated your criticism of the second half because I was having a hard time ...

Thank you for pointing that out! Your version definitely reads differently, I guess I kind of substituted line breaks for punctuation? I'll try to proofread my poems as an outside ...

Thank you so much for your time! I actually tend to lean towards a little off-sync rhyme schemes, but I don't want it to lead to a disorganized piece. I'll ...

Thank you for commenting! Chariot actually refers to the sun, like in Greek myth, the sun was pulled by Apollo and "her" refers back to the moon. It's not really ...

Thank you so much :D

I really like it - your imagery is absolutely brilliant. I love the way your line and paragraph breaks, really enjoyed reading it .x