DemiGodsRule12

Umm I like it but it went way to fast for me and it could've been longer, in my opinion. Another thing is that caught my attention is that Kiara's ...

This was really interesting. I liked the whole dream inside of a dream kinda feeling. :) I very much enjoyed it. The only things I saw were some choppy sentences, ...

Aha I love this story. :) I though it was very good, but there were just a few things wrong. Nothing big, just that there was a few spelling errors. ...

Spell check please! I really dn't like reading stories were the authors shorten words. So please use 'you' instead of 'u'. And secondly don't 'n' just take the extra two ...

I liked it I really did. The main thing that caught me was "Annabeth and I were supposed to be scouting out two more half bloods and pulling him from ...

Wow! This a very powerful piece in my opioun. I love how you made this woman seem so small and weak in Ross's mind, but in reality she is a ...

Wow I loved this story. It's a really great idea that you have going on. You had me captivated the entire time. I liked how you described almost everything in ...

Um.... Is Blake a he or she? And um I'm personally confused about this piece. What's going on? I get that they're in a lair and a beast is looking ...

These are reallyshort. If this is about Aphrodite then why are talking about Persephone and Demeter? You should make these things longer and packed with details! Everything needs a little ...

This was really interesting. I've never really reviewed poetry before, but this.... This was amazing! Interesting. I had to re-read just to understand it, and that means you've caught my ...

I like it. Different indeed, but in a good way ;). I really like how you didn't exactly say that they were vampires, but instead we had to keep reading ...

Interesting. I liked how you put the form of Light and Darkness into Bulls. Original and really cool. I give you mega poits for being orirginal. Spelling mistakes here and ...

Interesting indeed. You should add onto this and make more than just this one. Since Vray was talking about his human eating cousin, you should make it into a story ...

Well... I liked it. I really did, but the fact that there was no background on the apprentice I was lost. And I wanted to know why Death even had ...

Creepy creepy! Super duper interesting!!!! I was like glued to the screen when I was reading it. At first I thought, 'oh great just some boring story' well after I ...