Demeter

Hi there, Megan! Here (finally) as you requested. [One quick tip: You could somehow separate your A/N (author's note) by italicizing it or something, because now it looks a little ...

Hi, 200397! Sorry for the wait, I hope it's okay. his talking and laughing—and tenderly touching—another girl I think it should be he (or him?), or then you should change ...

Jennifer! Where have you been? Of course I'll do this for you, you knew that ;) I have a puzzle – a jigsaw. The opening line could be more "Tadah!". ...

Hey Shini! I don't think I've reviewed anything by you just yet, so here goes! =) To begin with, I've read, reviewed, and experienced more different kind of poetry than ...

Hi, Hannahness! I. I'll just be telling how I felt what I thought, if that's okay? I didn't feel like correcting anything, because I liked the entity very much. (Though, ...

:shock: all these in-depth critiques... So. I won't be going as far as I probably would if I had been the first to review this... *narrows eyes at Adna and ...

Hey, my fellow countryman. Once again, you have a lot of expression and (it seems) somewhat held-back emotion in a song, which is, of course, a good thing. As many ...

Hey, Vampire! Here as you requested, and of course I'd do this for you! You shouldn't even think I wouldn't like to :) The bell rang and students filled the ...

Hey there! This was really cute. :D Sock-ee: I'm lost! Drawer: The sock can talk! Hahaha! Father: Oh, honey, that's just a figment of your i-maj-er-a-shun. *Says in hillbilly accent* ...

... ... Oh, excuse me. I couldn't write anything, because I couldn't see, because my eyes were closed, because I was imagining the trailer. I can just see it before ...

Hey Clo! Here I am as you requested, sorry for the little wait. Julia Oeland died in March. I like this as an opening line. It's quite effective and does ...

I was going to say the same thing Grif did about the 'inferior, superior' matter. But now I don't have to. :) So, even with all the pointed out issues, ...

Hi, Anssi (and Otto if you're reading this)! I actually don't have that many nit-picks, but here's a few. Nabopolassar scoffed at the last word appearing in his mind. This ...

Moi, Anssi! Taas! :D Ilani, how could the king choose a failure like that? To make the meaning clearer, I suggest you replace the comma with a dash. the hallways ...

Moi, Anssi! He coughed weakly and turned towards the golden double doors that opened as his secret police force’s leader . Aram- A shur strode in. Aram [s]knelled[/s] before the ...