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Delirium

  • Poetry » Supernatural, Dramatic Re: Salto Mortal

    This-this was inspired by biology? Hahaha, you would never guess just by reading it. Anyways, I would like to start off by saying that this is a very well written ...

    Mar 4, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Watch Me Burn

    Alright. I very much enjoyed the concept behind this. However, I feel the first two stanzas may lack a bit of rhythm and flow. The last one flows nicely, though. ...

    Mar 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: Little Boat

    This is...amazing. I was so touched by the words and the simplicity. It truly speaks for miles. The only thing I might change is in the first stanza. He spent ...

    Mar 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Thrax

    I-I am nearly at a loss for words. I'd like to start by saying that this is truly amazing. While reading it, I felt so connected because the piece was ...

    Mar 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Behind it all

    Wow, I am almost at a loss for words here. Simply, remarkably stunning and mesmerizing. I love your vocabulary here and word choice. You use words so simple like "dance", ...

    Mar 4, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Spiritual Re: Sunday

    When it comes to a subject, a day of the week is one of the last things I would have expected such a magnificent piece to come from. I would ...

    Mar 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: It Takes A Village

    I would like to start by saying that this is simply beautiful. The simplicity is purely elegant. I love the contradiction within the stanzas and how it shows the fragile ...

    Mar 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Please Realize

    This is amazing, and I feel very connected with this piece as it is relatable. I love the idea of the "high horse" you suggest. I feel it is a ...

    Mar 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Mom

    I have to admit clicking the title of this made me a little hesitant, as I was not sure what to expect from a piece on the subject of a ...

    Mar 3, 2014


Owning our story can be hard but not nearly as difficult as spending our lives running from it. Embracing our vulnerabilities is risky but not nearly as dangerous as giving up on love and belonging and joy—the experiences that make us the most vulnerable. Only when we are brave enough to explore the darkness will we discover the infinite power of our light.
— Brené Brown