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Re: Salto Mortal
This-this was inspired by biology? Hahaha, you would never guess just by reading it. Anyways, I would like to start off by saying that this is a very well written ...
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Re: Watch Me Burn
Alright. I very much enjoyed the concept behind this. However, I feel the first two stanzas may lack a bit of rhythm and flow. The last one flows nicely, though. ...
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Re: Little Boat
This is...amazing. I was so touched by the words and the simplicity. It truly speaks for miles. The only thing I might change is in the first stanza. He spent ...
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Re: Thrax
I-I am nearly at a loss for words. I'd like to start by saying that this is truly amazing. While reading it, I felt so connected because the piece was ...
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Re: Behind it all
Wow, I am almost at a loss for words here. Simply, remarkably stunning and mesmerizing. I love your vocabulary here and word choice. You use words so simple like "dance", ...
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Re: Sunday
When it comes to a subject, a day of the week is one of the last things I would have expected such a magnificent piece to come from. I would ...
Mar 4, 2014 -
Re: It Takes A Village
I would like to start by saying that this is simply beautiful. The simplicity is purely elegant. I love the contradiction within the stanzas and how it shows the fragile ...
Mar 4, 2014 -
Re: Please Realize
This is amazing, and I feel very connected with this piece as it is relatable. I love the idea of the "high horse" you suggest. I feel it is a ...
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Re: Mom
I have to admit clicking the title of this made me a little hesitant, as I was not sure what to expect from a piece on the subject of a ...
Mar 3, 2014
