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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Pressure

    Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, lets get started. :D So, I quite like the ending. I don't know if others will ...

    Oct 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Yin Yang

    Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, Let's get started. :D The title fits the poem really well, adding more to it. I ...

    Oct 13, 2017
  • Art » Dramatic, Culture Re: Evil Egg

    Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe even some utter nonsense! So, let's begin! :D (Yes, I know this was posted a long while ago but it ...

    Oct 13, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: two reflections of my mind

    Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, let's get stared! :D Just looking at this poem I love the format you have it ...

    Oct 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The Worry Child

    Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, let's get started! :D Okay, first thing I notice is that a bunch of commas are ...

    Oct 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: water fire stars [draft 2 of bowing standing flying]

    Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, let's get started! :D Okay, love the poem. I can not say that enough. Also, WHO ...

    Oct 13, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: When the truth comes out

    Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, let's get started! :D So, first thing I notice when reading over is that a bunch ...

    Oct 13, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The world i live in-Ch. 1

    Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, let's get started! :D Okay, first thing I noticed is that whenever you started a new ...

    Oct 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Free

    Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, lets get started! :D Reading through this poem, I like it, as I do most other ...

    Oct 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Do you remember?

    Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! :D First off, the poems flow. It was quite good, not extremely bumpy which is nice. You ...

    Oct 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: A Clock (extended)

    Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! Let's get started then, Huh? :D I like this poem and at first, in all honesty, it ...

    Oct 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: For you have never done anything

    Hello, and E.E here for a possibly quick review filled with some utter nonsense! :) Okay, first thing I noticed is the side of the poem. You spelled out F*** ...

    Oct 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: In Us

    To start this off, I think that the topic you chose was an excellent choice for a poem. With this topic there is almost plenty to write about. It had ...

    Oct 11, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Six Word Sadness

    Six Word Sadness, it has a wonderful ring to it and definitely caught my eye. In six little words you managed to describe something huge. A person who's home isn't ...

    Oct 11, 2017
  • Poetry » Humor, Dramatic Re: Buyer's Remorse

    This is quite a quirky poem! I really like, for some odd reason, that it's about juice. It's about a person who begins to drink a certain juice less and ...

    Oct 9, 2017


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— William Shakespeare