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Re: The Pressure
Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, lets get started. :D So, I quite like the ending. I don't know if others will ...
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Re: Yin Yang
Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, Let's get started. :D The title fits the poem really well, adding more to it. I ...
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Re: Evil Egg
Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe even some utter nonsense! So, let's begin! :D (Yes, I know this was posted a long while ago but it ...
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Re: two reflections of my mind
Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, let's get stared! :D Just looking at this poem I love the format you have it ...
Oct 13, 2017 -
Re: The Worry Child
Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, let's get started! :D Okay, first thing I notice is that a bunch of commas are ...
Oct 13, 2017 -
Re: water fire stars [draft 2 of bowing standing flying]
Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, let's get started! :D Okay, love the poem. I can not say that enough. Also, WHO ...
Oct 13, 2017 -
Re: When the truth comes out
Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, let's get started! :D So, first thing I notice when reading over is that a bunch ...
Oct 13, 2017 -
Re: The world i live in-Ch. 1
Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, let's get started! :D Okay, first thing I noticed is that whenever you started a new ...
Oct 13, 2017 -
Re: Free
Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, lets get started! :D Reading through this poem, I like it, as I do most other ...
Oct 13, 2017 -
Re: Do you remember?
Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! :D First off, the poems flow. It was quite good, not extremely bumpy which is nice. You ...
Oct 13, 2017 -
Re: A Clock (extended)
Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! Let's get started then, Huh? :D I like this poem and at first, in all honesty, it ...
Oct 12, 2017 -
Re: For you have never done anything
Hello, and E.E here for a possibly quick review filled with some utter nonsense! :) Okay, first thing I noticed is the side of the poem. You spelled out F*** ...
Oct 12, 2017 -
Re: In Us
To start this off, I think that the topic you chose was an excellent choice for a poem. With this topic there is almost plenty to write about. It had ...
Oct 11, 2017 -
Re: Six Word Sadness
Six Word Sadness, it has a wonderful ring to it and definitely caught my eye. In six little words you managed to describe something huge. A person who's home isn't ...
Oct 11, 2017 -
Re: Buyer's Remorse
This is quite a quirky poem! I really like, for some odd reason, that it's about juice. It's about a person who begins to drink a certain juice less and ...
Oct 9, 2017
