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Re: Being A Poet
Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, lets get started! :D First thing I notice is that the flow is not the best. ...
Oct 17, 2017 -
Re: Light our fire
Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, lets get started. :D First thing I notice when I read this is that the line ...
Oct 17, 2017 -
Re: f this
Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, let's get started! :D So the first thing I notice is that your I's are not ...
Oct 17, 2017 -
Re: be proud
Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, lets get started. :D First thing I think when I see this "capitalization, poem!" After that ...
Oct 16, 2017 -
Re: Untitled
Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, lets get started. :D So, first thing I notice is that many places are in need ...
Oct 16, 2017 -
Re: Is it sad?
Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, let's get started. :D So, the title caught my eye but reading over the poem itself, ...
Oct 15, 2017 -
Re: Us
Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, lets get started. :D Before I being, I love that you connected this with your two ...
Oct 15, 2017 -
Re: Me
Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, lets get started. :D First thing I notice is that "Well who cares?" The word "well" ...
Oct 14, 2017 -
Re: Party Haiku
Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, lets get started. :D Before I begin I know this was posted a long while ago, ...
Oct 14, 2017 -
Re: When the truth comes out
Hello, E.E for a possibly quick review and maybe even some utter nonsense! So, let's get started. :D I quite like how you told the second part from the fathers ...
Oct 14, 2017 -
Re: after a parade
Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, lets get started. :D Before I begin I know this was posted a bit ago but ...
Oct 14, 2017 -
Re: vacant lot
Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, lets get started. :D Okay, first thing I notice is that whenever there should be a ...
Oct 14, 2017 -
Re: Hater
Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, lets get started. :D So, reading this, I like it. Some of the things I can ...
Oct 14, 2017 -
Re: Please Stop
Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, let's get started. :D So, the first thing I think when reading this is "Oh, look! ...
Oct 14, 2017 -
Re: You
Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! So, lets get started. :D The repetition of the line "I was hooked" is obviously important to ...
Oct 14, 2017