DeepCrystal

Yikes yikes yikes! Do you need a hug? This was almost like reading a script for HBO's In Treatment. Ever watched it? Pretty much just televised therapy. I am no ...

Welcome welcome, to Young Writers Society where you can post whatever as long as it is literary and other people can review it. We all hope that you enjoy your ...

Ten page essay in five minutes. That's...impressive. Now I am not able to speak from experience on scholarships students, so this might not be too helpful but I'll do my ...

Okay, I am here like you suggested. Now I am getting a somewhat clearer idea of what is going on in this story. A Lycan story? That was a pleasant ...

Aye-yi-yi. Suspenseful as implied. Not to mention the subtle intensity. I must say that this story has me eager for the next installment. Well done. Is Loveless some sort antihero? ...

Wow, my thoughts might not be much different than the ones already given, but still this was very beautiful. Right now I am reading Ovid's Heroides and the grace of ...

Very very nice. I like how you leave more to interpretation than to a drawn-out explanation of whatever point you are trying to make. Even I'm going to have to ...

Okay, the length I can deal with, but I had trouble actually reading this. Paragraphs? If you could maybe republish this in a few shorter parts, that would be great. ...

That was melancholy. From what this sounds like, this guy's fate has been handed to him on a silver platter. Is his life really tied to the fate of a ...

Hmm....This seems like a promising story. It has a good kick-start to it, and you seem to have introduced the foundation of an interesting plot. I like the relationship that ...

Wow, that was melancholy. Returning only to see him die. Strange death sentence too, sleeping until the heart has reached its limit. It also sounds like there was a love ...

Wow! This is one poem that I am finding myself that I am going to have to study. It seems very metaphorical. I like how you told a poetic story ...

That was very gripping. I'm going to have to read the previous chapters to get a few questions answered, but this was very enticing. It had a certain amount of ...

Wow, just wow. This is my first review I've made in a long while and I must say, I've stumbled on a rather good poem. It is very true, we ...

This had me laughing so hard I have tears in my eyes. You took a Disney song that everyone love and turned into an angsty Taylor Swift-ish song about a ...