Deanie

Hey ongoeslife. I liked the beginning of your poem. The use of thwip and the relation between the object and her emotions was a very good beginning. And then the ...

*ahem* I mean more ;P

Wow, that was a good poem. It had a beautiful ryhthm to it and it has very vivid imagery. It was so nice that I personally cannot see anything wrong ...

Ajt! I think this poem is really interesting. The idea I got from it was that you wanted things to improve in the world. That you wanted to pray for ...

I think this is really good. I'm looking forward to what is next and I like how you've set out the whole map for us already. We know their is ...

It's good. Looks perfect to me and I don't feel like I can help you improve somehow on this. Deanie x

Hi! I really liked this poem. It was really nice and had a very good flow to it. I'm not going to make this too long because you seem to ...

I liked this! But you do need to add more. This is not the amazing review I promised you XD thats coming soon. My advice: more! Deanie x

One word: Amazing

Simple and beautiful. A poem worth being written. I love your writing style. Deanie x

This version is a lot better than the precious. I like Mr. McCoy much better than Ale. I don't know why, but his name sounds more professional. Deanie x

Very sad, descriptive and true poem. Deanie x

Interesting. I like how the boys are really close friends that after a little blow up the bond again very quickly. Reminds me of my arguments with my older sister ...

I liked this version of Beauty and the Beasts. It was really original and very interesting. I liked how you put it in the time of the Minotaur and how ...

Wow, this is really powerful. I see no grammar mistakes, except that in the beginning paragraphs you use the word 'no one' a lot, and you put it as a ...