Deanie

Hi Esca! I would usually leave a review, but after reading this I honestly can't find a thing I would change. I like the awkwardness but then again how well ...

Thank youuu! And yes, I love the way they sound and work. I just had to try my own after reading too many :3

Your reviews are not short! And thank you for the help!

I will put in the Dutch version soon! When I have le time :3

Well, as long as you come by now and again to check for a review, then I shall be here and reviewing it! I can't guarantee they will all be ...

Would it still be useful to review or not? Let me know and I will do whichever you say ^^

So for me you wrote a poem about something I hate? Thanks so much xD You're so weird, you know. Totally craxy.

What should I say, hm? I wouldn't change a thing ;) But you know, I still am petrified of spiders.

Thanks so much for the review :D When I roll around to editing this particular chapter, can glance through it and tell me if it has improved?

I will be waiting until then :)

Agreed! Wall posts are a good idea - and tag me so I know when to come back :3

Audy, your reviews make me smile :) You are welcome to join my art class any time! Oh, and yes, I know next to nothing when it comes to structure ...

Oh Writer, you're always helpful

Thanks so much for the site! I hadn't heard of it before, but I will try it. Passive tense is a problem of mine... :)