Deanie

Hey Omi! Because you've given me such great reviews on some of my works, I think it's time I reviewed some of yours. I think you have a good knack ...

Hey there Crystal! I decided it was time for me to finally read something of yours. Is this your Nano novel? Hmm, I think this seemed more like the beginning ...

Hey there! You posted without telling me D: Now I feel sad. How am I supposed to keep up with the story? Will you tell me next time? This a ...

Hello! I'm finally going to be all caught up with these chapters :D This was an okay chapter. It released a lot of suspense though, which will surely keep the ...

Hey there again :) I like this chapter a lot. We get to learn more about Theo's abilities, what with him touching Dieter and then him also not recognizing the ...

Hey there :D I've returned for more of your story! This just continues getting interesting. So now that Carrie knows about her low body temperature, wouldn't she be a bit ...

Hello again :] Tired of me yet? I think this was a... reasonable chapter. Mrs Johns is way creepy. My only problem with her being a biology teacher is, would ...

Hey there! Reading more because I have the time ;) So this was a great read :D I like how now Noel knows that Theo is messing with her mind. ...

Hey there, Here to read the newly improved version. It seems like a bit more of a daunting task after seeing such a great first review. I'll do my best ...

Here to keep reading :D So, this chapter was much better. Noel has started to act strange. I wonder why, even when the device probably affected Theo, not her. Maybe ...

Hello again, I liked reading this, because it gave a further description of the characters and their relationships. Which was exactly what I asked for, and hoped to see! So ...

Hello there! A bit of a late welcome to YWS from me :3 I'm sure you've got the swing of it by now. I'm going to try and read through ...

Hello there! I really liked this poem. You have a great use of imagery and words here, and it seems to work so well to make such a beautiful poem. ...

Hey there! I am here to review your short story :) I would like to say it was very interesting. I liked how you had Megara meet Hercules at a ...

Hi Alpaca! I liked reading this. It has a nice story to it, and it's very suiting seeing as winter is coming. It had an okay rhythm. It was good ...