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Hey again! More to read. I liked this chapter. It's pretty clear that Noel is in trouble, and I wonder how they'll manage saving her as well. I didn't see ...

Hey Budgie! Seeing as you've already had a detailed review on the technical side of things, I will try and keep to the storyline side. I'm in a picky mood ...

Hey there Kev again :) This was quite a different story from the first one. I really expected something different to happen to Elisa, I thought you were hinting at ...

Hey Kev! I decided I just had to read something of yours, even if it's horror which ugh, is not really my type of thing. But the way you wrote ...

Hi there, back to review the second chapter! I liked that we got to see April's 'dooms day' as she called it. It was interesting to know what happened to ...

Allo! Me again as usual :) What a lovely beginning to the chapter! You did exquisitely well with Yvette's explanation of what happened to her and why they're all after ...

Hey there MooCowPoop, I always see these messages that you posted something, so I decided I'd actually look at one for once. And I'm glad I did because I sincerely ...

Back again for more! I liked this chapter, because you get to see all the main characters coming together to and sharing a moment of passion over their past. It ...

Hey Arli! I just found some free time so I will review this now. My apologies for it taking so long. This was another interesting chapter where we got to ...

Hey there again! Thanks for letting me know this was up. I liked this chapter, although it seemed a little fuzzy to read, and I felt a bit confused in ...

Hey Rishabh! I am ready to review the next thing. Mm, I think I preferred the other one. Although I am understanding what you mean to say, the English language ...

Hey Okuro! Just decided to stop by this poem :) You've done a good job here with showing what you want to tell us in a lovely way with words. ...

Hey Rishabh! So I didn't get to this on review day, I apologise. But I am here now, and you may have to wait a little bit longer before review ...

Hello again Sarah ^^ Here to get reviewing the next chapter! Agh, some parts of this chapter were just so wonderful! I especially loved the really descriptive scene you wrote ...

Hey there Sarah! I'm sorry I didn't make getting to this for review day, but instead I will write this review now! Thanks for letting me know you posted more. ...