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Deanie

  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: Conversations with Myself: Chapter 7 - Conversations with a God

    Hi Calvinn! Look who's here, surprise! ;) Let's get to it. You've got some very interesting ideas here. Consciences with colours and voices? Wars aren't the result of human battles ...

    Dec 24, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Supernatural Re: Trapped in a Fairy Tale World: Chapter 1

    Hey there Kman! Here to review again :) I really like the idea of fairy tales coming to life, with your own twist on it. It's a clever and unique ...

    Dec 24, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Supernatural Re: Trapped in a Fairy Tale World: Prologue

    Hey Kman! Sorry for being so slow at coming round to this. I guess I planned to do too much this holiday because I'm just as exhausted and not getting ...

    Dec 24, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Shadowed Pryde: Chapter One

    Hey Knightteen, I haven't watched any of the X-men films, so I am reviewing this as if it is a normal story is you don't mind me saying. What did ...

    Dec 20, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: Conversations with Myself: Chapter 6 - The All Clear Sounded

    Last chapter and then I'm all caught up! What happened to the title? Isn't it supposed to say the title of the novel and the chapter number? I find it ...

    Dec 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: Conversations with Myself: Chapter 5 - The Last Glimpse

    Back again! Ouch. Poor Rose, I feel so much sympathy for her. She's tried to do what she thought was best for her man and she's trying to do the ...

    Dec 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: Conversations with Myself: Chapter 4 - Problems with Relatives

    Hey there Calvinn! Grr... writing such good pieces of work makes it very hard for us reviewers! I suppose I got exactly what I asked for, which was more information ...

    Dec 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Fantasy Re: Conversations with Myself: Chapter 3 - A Conscience's Tale

    Hey there Calvinn! Here to review! I did read the previous chapters as well so I would know what was going on. Whoa. It was a bit unexpected to see ...

    Dec 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Finding Destiny (Chapter 5)

    Back for more! ;) I liked this chapter again! Now we get to see some of the intimacy between the two characters, and we can see how they've started to ...

    Dec 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Finding Destiny (Chapter 4)

    Hey there Gossipgirl! I'm here to review your story. I just wanted to let you know I read your old chapters as well, so I'm not just randomly diving into ...

    Dec 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Shadowed Angel (Chapter 4)

    Hi Planve! I've finally caught up in chapters. What I like about this one is that we get to see John isn't entirely heartless, and he's still fairly human. He ...

    Dec 15, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Shadowed Angel (Chapter 3)

    Hi there Planve! Back again to continue reading :) This chapter was very good when it came to action. You used devices such as short sentences and I was hooked ...

    Dec 15, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Technology Re: The Quantum Mind: End

    Hey Budgie! Aww what a sweet ending. I really enjoyed reading this all the way through! There was quite a few time jumps, which I didn't like so much :S ...

    Dec 14, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Technology Re: The Quantum Mind: Chapter 18

    Hey there! I'm going to try and read this all the way to the end, seeing as there is only one final chapter to the story! This seems like one ...

    Dec 14, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Shadowed Angel (Chapter 2)

    Hey there Planve! I've come back to read the next chapter. I liked it a lot, because we got to see more of John and what he does in detail. ...

    Dec 14, 2013


Tell me, what is it you plan to do / with your one wild and precious life?
— Mary Oliver