Deanie

Hey Tiny Tim! So remember how you said I don't review poetry and I said I'd review that one tomorrow >.> You should've reminded me! Anyways, this is a different ...

Yo Timmy! I have to say this was the best chapter you've written so far. Absolutely. There was so much detail in every single part of it, and it was ...

Hi Fictional! So I read the other parts before reading this one, and it didn't take me long at all so I didn't mind. What I can say is that ...

Hey there Fictional! I'm here to read and review this poem. At first as I was reading it, I was kind of confused. I couldn't understand where you were going ...

Hey there Batman! (I love your username) I wasn't able to get to this during review day, but I'm here here now :) I have to say, in this chapter ...

Hey Serene, Well, this was a sad story. It was told in a rather interesting way, using second person. I think you made all the you's bold to put a ...

Hey Dory! Thanks for the reminder to review this. Now, in general it wasn't necessarily a bad chapter. I mean your descriptive skills... tip top as usual! I don't know ...

Hi Willow! Yay! This time I don't really have any nitpicks for me to pull out which is always a good start. :) I'm also liking Belinda a bit more ...

Hey Willow, So I decided I would try this. It seems interesting and I like the name choices you've made. I mean first names and last names for all three ...

Heya Knightteen Definitely seeing how it is fanfiction at the moment. I like how this story is going. I really like your main character... she seems so observant because she ...

Hey there Ulala! Me again, I thought this was an interesting chapter, although it wasn't as good as the previous. In the previous one there was action, a difficult choice ...

Hey Ulala I've been meaning to read your story for a while, seeing as it had something to do with Sherlock. I only just got here now! It was a ...

Hey Anabel! This was a bit of something different in you story, starting with the present and then showing a flashback to explain everything. Which was interesting, and I liked ...

HI Isha, So, I read this is and it was also nice for me to know Brazil is getting out of hospital because I can feel the story starting to ...

Hey Anabel! This was a good chapter. It was nice to see the end of the case, and get a look at what their magic powers can actually do. It ...