Deanie

JABBERRRRRRRR! Well hi! I'm not sure you'll ever get this comment because its the last of many. I know you wrote this poem years ago... but thats just what I ...

Hi! Very quick comment here - I just really loved this poem. It doesn't give to much detail on what happened to corrupt the love or whatever, but it shows ...

Hi ajt! I really loved this poem. It was so nice to know the story behind it... and this is so cute! I don't have any criticism except it was ...

Hello! Well I liked all the poems. I almost immediately noticed they were all linked up in a way. It was nice to read it as one long poem and ...

Heya aj! I loved this poem. It was very clear and the poem was straight to the point. It was very easy to understand that the topic was pollution. And ...

Hi Lily. I can really understand this poem. Its very easy to relate to. I like the opening. It really quickly draws me into the poem and makes me an ...

Hello mello! Well I love this poem. It's true. People knock you down again and again in life, all you can do is stand up and do it all again. ...

hi glitter Well this poem was beautifully written but its terribly sad. I felt so much pity welling up in my heart it was unbelievable. But I liked it... no ...

Hello Well, I think the title love doesn't suite this limerick much. I think there may be a better title but I can't think of it. I feel kind of ...

Hello! :) I agree with Gee. I think you can call yourself a poet because you write wonderfully. It isn't too complicated or confusing. You write nice and simply, and ...

Hi! Well I really liked this poem. The layout was weird but I think it displays how people think when they are desperate. They don't think straight (or sometimes they ...

Heya Dogs I am not very sure this review will be of any use to you. I just wanted to let you know that this poem is epic. I love ...

Hi Cailey! Let me just say this poem was great! The rhyming scheme was perfect and flowed really well. I like reading the original and comparing it to yours. The ...

Heya Blue! I liked this version just as much as I like the previous one. I loved your opening line. It was like a warning to the reader that something ...

Big sis! Here is the review you have been waiting for... er... I hope its of some use! Well I love how you started this second chapter. It's more introducing. ...