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Hey Jenthura, This is not technically an essay, more like a read to thing so I regard it differently. But it was clear and concise, and it showed your ideas. ...

Hey Snowfall :) So I liked reading this a lot! It was entertaining, quite humourous and a very unique idea. It is a funny questions, and that makes for a ...

Heya Creativity, Wow. I mean, just wow. This has to be one of my favourite short stories I've ever read on YWS. You should try sending this to a magazine ...

Hey Umaima, Here as promised! This was a good chapter, and I believe it to be the best so far. It told a lot about their growing relationship and how ...

Heya Rishabh, I'm here to review this next chapter. The English language here is still improving. Beware of typos and awkward sentences. What I mean is, watch out for comma ...

Hello again :) I liked this chapter a lot. It wasn't a proper action scene, but fairly close to one. I didn't even know I like sparring scenes until I ...

Hey again :) Here to review the ending. It was good how halfway through the chapter you bring Reme back and we realize that the future hasn't change. We kind ...

Hey there, So I liked this chapter more, especially as Reme and Vermon become real people who aren't just on people on a camcorder. Hmm, the main characters reaction to ...

Hi WholesomeReader, This is just a quick short review. The awkward thing I find about this story, is the persona it is set in. Second persona is a bit weird ...

Hey Shadow Your writing style is unique, and that's always a nice element to have to your writing. I don't think I've ever read anything that's similar to the way ...

Shadow! Let's review, huh? I liked this chapter a lot because it shows a little bit about Rana's history and it's nice because it shows us how close Rana, Char ...

Hello again ShadowVyper, You have a thing for long chapters don't you? One thing that I would be careful for here is too many names for characters. I felt like ...

I grumbled something, impossible to understand, I knew. Hi ShadowVyper, I read the previous chapters before this so I would be able to understand what was going on. One thing ...

Taaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamsies! Yes I am incredibly desperate :D So I am reviewing lyrics. I always find that difficult because I always have a need for a tune with it. Please excuse ...

Hello Empress, Here to review the next chapter. I liked this one a lot. It improved upon the last one with a nice mixture of information and narrative. I think ...