DeadlyAF

I liked this very much. Some of the lines were really beautiful and relatable. There are a LOT of grammar mistakes though, that made reading this not as enrapturing as ...

Hey! You did really well with the rewriting. Methinks I'm going to continue with this story after all. I liked how you gave us enough time to get accustomed to ...

Hey! I'm really loving this story so far. Although there are some grammatical mistakes. But it's a great story and the plot is really intriguing. You're really a great writer. ...

Hey! This poem was truly a great read! Although I feel like there were a little grammatical errors in the punctuation. I liked how you expressed the emotions in such ...

Hey! So great work , didn't expect a poem about pizza to be this deep to be honest. It was truly a great read. Although if you pay attention to ...

Everyone who's read harry potter is living in a fantasy land in their heads. >.>

Although there are some grammatical errors, this story will be a great and relatable read for everyone who has read books like Harry Potter! It was brilliant!