DeadEndsAreOptional

Thank you for the review, it's really helpful. :) I'll be sure to tell you to when I put the second part up, if you wish to read the next ...

giantslenate09 - When Marcella is hearing about Robert's death, George says 'Mr. Robert Franks past away in the line of duty on the 8th day of August.' so he is ...

It's such a great story so far! The description is wonderful, and the characters are interesting, I can't wait to read more of this story!:)

Thank you for the review! I'm really glad that Marcella is becoming such an interesting character, I have fun writing in her view. I'm actually adding some of her memories ...

I might post more, it's not final what I will do yet. I like the french title chapters, that's a good idea. It's going to be in alternative perspectives, it'll ...

jasminebells: No, it's not the final title of the story. If you have suggestions for the name that would be great! BenFranks: Thank you for noticing the mistakes, I wouldn't ...

I just noticed that right now, I will change it. Thanks for the review!

I will be sure to change the past/present tense mix-ups. Thanks for the review! :)

I have posted the second part up! You can go here to read it:

Thank you for the review! You're suggestions has helped me greatly; I'll work on the flaws and hopefully the story will improve. :D

I'm sorry it confused you, I'll work on that! It's set now days, in the second part hopefully you can tell that (I haven't yet posted the second part, but ...

Thanks for all the help on my mistakes! I'll work more on my description, thanks again for the tips/suggestions (they'll help me a lot). :)