DauntlessDagger

Nice to see another Star Wars fan! Okay, here’s the review: Bad cop: The first paragraph feels a bit clumsy. To fix it I’d maybe turn it into two or ...

Wow, I definitely relate! This was very good, and I love the way you styled it.

Wow. This is a really good poem. It's very deep.

Yes, very true. My parents have always been radicals; my father came to Christ in his teens and just read the Bible for himself instead listening to the pastor. Every ...

Oh, this is an amazing poem for its sheer honesty. Almost all poems, songs and story’s about Jesus paint this sweet, sugary picture that is often a complete lie, acting ...

Thanks for your review! The story takes place right after the fourth book.

Wow, thanks so much! That was a really helpful review. I will try to fix the things you said.