DarthKay

Oh wow :) Thanks so much for the reviews! I know it's not amazing but i was just sick today, lying in bed, so i just came up with that ...

Awesomeness :) That is all...

Oh thanks so much you guys! On that last line I pictured a bunch of kids sitting at a table with fake smiles and plastered on make-up. Haha, Calligraphy... I ...

Thanks for the feedback! The reason why my story is actually so short is because it was actually something I had to write for school and it could only be ...

Thank you :D Oops! and yes, you're right! *edited* And thanks a lot for the review!!

Hey guys ;) I definitely agree with you, Knightley, it does look pretty jumbled... Its actually starting to confuse me now! But thanks a lot for the feedback :D It ...

I fixed it up now so hopefully there are no more problems, But thanks for pointing that out and thanks for the feedback, much appreciated :D

Thanks a lot! :D The reason why "I" don't really feature in this piece is because it is supposed to be a descriptive essay (Yes, this was my english homework ...

Thanks Mr Knightley , I'll keep that in mind :wink: This is my first post so wasn't even expecting to get any comments at all... so thank you :)