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Re: Nostos
Hi beccalicious94, Daemon here for a little reviewing. Let me start by saying, this, in my opinion, is beautiful. Clearly thought out, and at times quite concise, but your imagery ...
Jun 8, 2017 -
Re: Arcane Prolouge
Hi TerreN, Just popping by to do some reviewing:) I love the idea you're trying to represent. I, myself, have a deep love for fantasy and magic. However, I feel ...
Jun 6, 2017 -
Re: Digging Myself Out
Hi, Klennon14 Darkthorn here to leave you a little review :). First let me just start by saying I love the little before hand note. Being honest enough and straight ...
Mar 3, 2016 -
Re: She flows one last time
Hi, Darkthorn here for a review. Let me just say, this piece is captivating and intense. One of my favorites so far. The lack of stanzas normally makes for a ...
Feb 1, 2015 -
Re: Dear Dolly
Hi Madisonfrevert, Darkthorn here for a review. Simply put, this is AMAZING!!!!!!! It is an exceptionally well crafted masterpiece. It is saddening and heart-felt, and speaks to the reader on ...
Jan 30, 2015 -
Re: Smelly Sweaters
Hi Awkwardadolescent, Darkthorn here for some review time. I like the idea behind what you're trying to say: all the pent up, unmentionables we store away up in the old ...
Jan 28, 2015 -
Re: Sky Steel: Capture & Rescue
The story has an amazing amount of potential, and even as it is its quite a nice story. However some mistakes in it made for a laborious read. For example: ...
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: The Sterling Knight
Hi MargoSeuss. I just want to say, right off the bat; I love this. It's truly amazing. However, the fact this is in a single stanza style is somewhat monotonous. ...
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: Premonition: Prologue and Chapter One
To an extent, this is quite "magnifique". When most stories grip you, its usually due to action or something "big". However, this story's grip-factor is truly quite subtle. What really ...
Oct 3, 2014 -
Re: The Legend of He Who Endured: Prologue (Rewrite)
Just skimmed through the last half of the piece from about half way in, after reading the first. The action is there, the adrenalin is definitely there, and the detail ...
Sep 13, 2014
