DarknecrosisX

First review I've done in a while, so I may be a tad rusty. To start with the introduction set the scene well, you didn't go too far into description ...

Very nice, even if it is fanfiction :P Your character has substance, which those who write their own novels often miss when creating their own, so for that I commend ...

Hey Purple, sorry this took so long to get around to, but I’m here now, so let’s get on with the review! This was a brilliant read, I learned a ...

This poem is very spooky, and for me it wasn't the theme of it either. What scared me the most was how the poem actually made itself increase in pace; ...

This is what I love about inspired pieces: they convey such a powerful message because the writer knows how the audience should feel- which is often the same way they ...

Okay, I'll be honest. This wasn't great. The imagery worked really well and the theme of recovery/rescue is well described, but the rhythm isn't particularly good. The constant changing of ...

This piece shows signs of potential, should it be continued into a story, however, if it were to do so, this part gives away too much about the plotline, the ...

Okay, this piece was very brief, but from what I can see you have a very dramatic criminal villain overlord character that you are introducing, or at least this is ...

Nice work man, loving the rhymes you threw in here, it seems as if rhyming comes naturally to you, which I can guarantee it doesn't me! The theme of love ...

Sorry I took so long- I'm starting to wish I got to this sooner! This story has a very strong philosophical moral aimed at the reader, which will, undoubtedly inspire ...

Ok, I got the request and I'm here to review! Well, this was a very nice inspired, descriptive piece. Although there was little actually going on, it still came across ...

I can describe this story with one word- extraordinary. This was a fantastic psychological horror, the pace and masterful timing of events and revelations that sent chills down my spine. ...

A very interesting short-story, an intriguing tale that seems to adopt a slightly darker and more cultural approach to the 'Princess and the Frog' fairy tale. The way in which ...

Hey Z03. This was, in my opinion, an impressive piece of prose poetry, well thought out and written. The way you used the adjectives to describe life with and without ...

A nice piece of prose poetry, and it certainly has a unique personal touch to it. I love poetry that is based around philosophical questions, and the rhetoric used throughout ...