Darkmoon158

Yeah about that...I can't add Chapter 3 to Chapter 2 because it would make it too long. Plus, hmm..how do I say this without giving stuff away. Well, you learn ...

Well, I thank all of you for your suggestions and time. I'll take into consideration what all of you said. I have already rewritten the parts where I needed to. ...

actually she's not gothic...you learn later on why she dresses that way..plus she's not even human I thought when I said she had opal stone eyes that was a hint ...

I thank you all for commenting. *bows at feet* I am not worthy! Oh and Misty Lynn I put my dialogue in green so it was easier to read, nothing ...

*blinks eyes fast* That scared me, but in a good way. It means I was absorbed in the story. I felt everything they did. I give you three thumbs up. ...

Wow I thought no one was going to like my story. To tell you guys the truth this story was actually a quiz I wrote for quizilla that I found ...

He, he, he....both your questions, that concerned my characters, will be answered soon enough I assure you that. I didn't know you guys wanted to read the rest of the ...

Oh see what your saying Sarah, I'll quickly change that. *flips through documents on the computer* Found it! *does happy dance* ok....I'll change it now.....*corrects to add suspense* Thanks, that ...

It was really good. I like the way you describe things. :D

Blizzard you are soooo weird. But alas I loved it too. I never did anything like that. My poems always end up being a narrative story-like poem.

First off I've never had any life long friends so I wouldn't know how they act to each other. I know what you're going to ask next, have I ever ...

I have a hard decision to make. So I need to ask my readers, I revised chapters 1-4 and I wanted to know if you guys want me to post ...

Yeah I know it's a bit fast but I wanted to speed up that part so I could just get on..........here's part two of that chapter it's short, I think. ...

*sadly* Sigh, I get the point. If you guys don't want to hear anymore I'll stop posting. I know you're just helping but I've been having a very BAD patch ...

Ok fine then I was just trying to explain to you that I don't need to change the attitude I don't have. :lol: I don't like leaving people in a ...