Darkhalm7_Melissa

I'm agreeing with KJ. You have loads of mistakes. And grammar and rough spots. Please read over and over until you think you've got everything and leave the rest to ...

Finally! It's been way to long wince you wrote poetry girl! Now then, on with the reveiw! I like how you threw in a romantic twist. As well as the ...

Great detail and everything! Can't wait to read the next part! I didn't catch anything, but there might've been a few things at the very beginning... D7M :D

If any errors, everyone else seems to have caught them. I found this very intiguing( excuse me if mis-spelled). Probably because I love the night and the mystery every shadow ...

AWESOME!!! That was a very touching story Suz! I just loved they romance and slight horror you threw into that! Very dramatic. I can't wait to take a gander at ...

Hahahaha! That was a great ending. *snicker* Kay so it's not much to laugh about but still...I thought this was really good... I'll be searching for more of your work, ...

The others have had their say so why not me? I personally thought this was amusing. Very fun. Although the others are right about the mistakes you had but I ...

I thought this was great. It flowed well and such. And although I'm not one for big words, I think I was able to understand what you were getting at. ...

Oh God that was touching...Reminds me of my last relationship. I still have feelings for him... Never the less just like Time we must move on with it! I hope ...

This was great! Anymore words to describe it? Of course yet to many to list! God I just started here and I already love this stuff! D7M :D :D :D

Hmmm...I agree with Shadow Theif. This definetly wasn't as good as the first one. Ah well. That is just an opinion on the matter...With as many reviews as you have ...

Hmmmm...This is pretty good...I'm just not getting the plot very well. You might want to go over this to make things run a bit smoother 'kay? I still look forward ...

I like this version better than Hidden Secrets. But by the way I think thing will turn out. Use the title as a sequel one. You had a couple of ...

OMG Theif! It's been so long since I've got contact to you! You had a mistake here... "She is in Hurricane's care father, do not worry." said the night who ...