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Re: MY China story
It was an interesting story at the very most and it did have a good plot line but I do wish that you could have more of showing in your ...
Mar 15, 2016 -
Re: From Bad to Worse
It was a fun story with twists and turns but there were some issues with the story. There were some run-on sentences and some other grammar issues like that. It ...
Mar 15, 2016 -
Re: The Wanted and Unwanted
This is not the best book but if you are in to death then you are good. I like how you used chinese names in your stories and I like ...
Mar 14, 2016 -
Re: In the Rain
I like how you had a lot of detail in the story and action. I also like all of the Chinese name even if they are misleading. I wonder if ...
Mar 14, 2016