Danteke

The name of the diary brings back a cat's name from Dragon Age - Ser Pounce-a-lot. I have finally found a name for you! Since I can't have a Sir ...

I must admit, I love TCG way. The way she treats her diary as a being is refreshing, simple and pleasant. I am Kitty. That's not my real name of ...

Your chapter did do its job and made me promise to come back for the next chapter, but it also left me with a bitter taste in my mouth as ...

Salve! First of all, it needs a bit of polishing and some minor changes which I will point out next. You concentrate a lot on the physical aspects of your ...

Ok. Good start-up, but I suggest you revise the first part being a bit more clear on the date. The part with the aunt is fluff. It has no actual ...

First of all, you have a pretty nice piece here. You could put an accent on "hunger" a bit more, increase the line of thought in the first paragraph that ...