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Re: Brotherly
I thought it was show don't tell?
Feb 17, 2018 -
Re: deleted
Thank you! You didn't mention Cody was gay and it did seem like he was in love with Elie, so sorry about that. My bad!
Feb 16, 2018 -
Re: Knny (No E's)
That was kinda the whole point that it has no e's, that's what makes it funny.
Feb 16, 2018 -
Re: Ten 6-word short stories
Hi! Danni here for a review! Let's get this out of the Green Room. I really enjoyed these. Guessing they were for the Olympics? I like the way some are ...
Feb 14, 2018 -
Re: Life's for the Living - Part 1
Sure! I will put it on my list
Feb 7, 2018 -
Re: Charlie Charlie Is Watching Me
Whoa creeeeeeeeeeeeeeepy!
Jan 30, 2018 -
Re: Life's for the Living - Part 1
This is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too long for me to review. Can you
Jan 30, 2018 -
Re: Magicae High: Solangelo Chapter 1
EVIL
Jan 29, 2018 -
Re: Ecliptic (WIP Need feedback, really short)
Definitely better!
Jan 29, 2018 -
Re: Ecliptic (WIP Need feedback, really short)
Will do! :D
Jan 29, 2018 -
Re: Marcia and Me: Prologue
Thanks! Glad you liked it!
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: Marcia and Me: Prologue
*facepalms* I AM SO SORRY!!! I CAN%u2019T BELIEVE I FORGOT!!
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: The Wonder Twins Chapter One: What the Hel?
Thanks for the review! Really helps. I couldn%u2019t see any grammar errors?
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: Lost
It%u2019s OK!
Jan 26, 2018 -
Re: Lost
Just a tip, if you're going to use language in your story, put it in the title, like rate it 12+.
Jan 26, 2018