Danceingtreeelf

This is a very interesting story by far. It really pulls you in with the first paragraph but then it's kinda like you got side tracked. This chapter really need ...

Hello Danceingtreeelf her for a review. :) Your story is defiantly an eye catcher and a very good read. I love the way you have started off, but you probably ...

I love the idea behind this story but I did notice a few problems and places that could described less and more. Your really good but you could change up ...

Hello Danceingtreeelf here, I had to laugh throughout this because of the characters fighting back with the writer. I also agree with the girls that you should give them names ...

So sad It made me cry in the end and made me think of my own grand father who died last year. You put all those feelings and daydreams in ...

Right from the start it is good but you really need to capitalize and add punctuation,I mean this whole story it really just a really really long run-on. It is ...

This is beautiful and scary and so life telling.I had to read it twice before I could comment or review, your words are written and placed very well and you ...

Hello I like the way this reads but I found a few problems. You really need punctuation and to maybe be less repetitive. When you began to counter things you ...

Hello just stopping by to say I like the way it starts off but then after the first two or three sentences i got a little board. (I mean its ...

OMG! I love this it pulled me in at first word,only i feel its to short. I love the way you portray the characters emotions and feelings. It makes you ...