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Hey there Roundsquare! How are you doing this fine day? As I told you I would be earlier, I'm here to review this work of yours. I thank you again ...

I love the complete and utter randomness of the poem, reminds me of my inner self at times. Great title, great poem, good job! Being as this poem is supposed ...

Hey Wildwildcat, Once again you've done a good job with plot and description. And just like with the first part you did a good job drawing the readers in at ...

Hello there, Wildwildcat. Although I don't read this kind of story too often, I really enjoyed this first part of A Week For the World. The title is a great ...

Hello Jordin. I'm a little busy at the moment so this review might not be too long. A few comments: Once again you forgot to add puntuation. You also had ...

Hello Jordin. That cold day I came home later than I normally did . I walked slowly up the front porch stairs and knocked on the door “hello” I said ...

Hello Jordin, I'm here with a review. This story definitely has potential. I like what you have so far, but I think you could still improve it. Right now you ...

Hello there. I really liked this story so far and thought you did a good job on it. As others have mentioned, I believe there are a few grammatical errors, ...

Hello, Cspr. I thought this was interesting. It's definitely not my normal style, but I thought you did a good job. I like the words you used and can picture ...

Hello, I'm here with a review for you. Altogether I thought it was really good and you described it well. I am not familiar with the Warhammer 40,000 universe, but ...

Hello, I saw the link on your wall and decided to read this. I thought it was a really good prologue. I love the whole idea and I'm curious as ...