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Hi Tayla Chase, Well... you said you haven't written poetry before? Maybe you should write more, eh? I loved your piece! It was very poetic, and I didn't think the ...

Just suggested her teammates read your piece and I'm gad she did. I enjoyed the poetry very much, you wrote a splendid piece! I don't really have any nit-picks or ...

Hi Icy, So I wanted to say thank you for reviewing my work by reviewing one of your pieces in return. And wow, this was awesome! It had a very ...

Hi there! You reviewed a piece of mine a while back and I was just here to return the favor:) Okay, so the first stanza confused me a bit but ...

Hi ya! So thanks for reviewing my work, I'm now here to return the favor! I liked your piece, especially how even though it was set in the medieval times ...

Hi there! Returning the favor for reviewing my piece, thanks so much:) Wow, so I loved your writing, it was very emotional and deep. She began to cry, he could ...

Hi ya, It's Dakota here for a review! First off I will start with a few nit-picks. Tink tink tink. I pressed my fingers onto the keys of the piano, ...

Hi ya! Sorry, I took a break from reviewing to drown in my own novel so now that I've come up for air I'm going to do some more reviews:) ...

Hi ya Zanna, Thanks for letting me know you posted more, I really love your story. It's so vibrant and full of life and the characters, well I love them, ...

What happened to chapter 4? I couldn't find it and it wasn't on your novel page... “Errg, I ‘ve been asked to help with the slaughtering of a few sheep ...

Hi there, So I read your other chapters but they had quite in-depth reviews so I'll start here. Chapter one was my least favorite so far but chapter two was ...

Hi Zanna! So, here to review! First off, the prologue part really draws us in but it was a lot of show not tell so I couldn't feel it like ...

Ok Lady RaRa, so I'm here to follow up on reading the prologue. "BRYLEIGH NICOLE! ARE YOU AWAKE YET?" Again, should it be all caps? I woke with a start ...

Hi Lady RaRa, So your prologue was pretty decent, it didn't give me too much of anything, other than the fact the the story is about a girl who get's ...

Hi ya there Katrina!!! I never saw it change, But there's something different than before. There has to be a better way, This yawning gap we can't ignore. [ Yawning ...