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Re: the dance of death
Aww... it's so happy, but so sad at the same time. I really like it. So, I'm pretty sure that the guy got murdered, and she commited suicide to be ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: One Day (contest entry)
Awww... I really, really loved this! It was so creative how you used your prompt. At first the description of what Blake was doing with the leaf confused me, but ...
Jun 4, 2011 -
Re: Dragon Scales
Nice ending. It was short, and it seemed like an excerpt (did I spell that right?) but it was very nice. Perhaps just a few more really wow words could ...
Jun 4, 2011 -
Re: Why am I a Christian?
I love you. I loved this. It was wonderful, thank you for writing it. It's really hard when some people give Christians a bad rep, I want to say, "But ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Vulture & Swan
I know this is for the same contest as my Disgrace to Wolf , but I really did enjoy this piece. I did find the huge spaces to be a ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Anatomy of a Portrait
I love this. It was incredibly beautiful, a pleasure to read. I loved the atmosphere of the whole thing. The one part that was confusing was when he drew wings, ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Mirror: Chapter Two
I love Callum. As long as he doesn't turn out to be some evil creep, then I'll continue to love him. Call me cliche or whatever, but I can't help ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: The Boy Who Wasn't There
Hello! I'm back to review this wonderful poem again because, well... I just can't leave it alone. I don't know how legitimate the suggestions I'm going to give you are, ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Mirror: Chapter One
Wow. This was really good. I like how the storyline isn't... boring, or common. I mean, sure there's a lot of car crashes, but not every crash leads you to ...
May 18, 2011 -
Re: Photos of a Wolf
Ah, this was reall well done. Your dialouge is very natural, and that's one of the things I struggle with, so I admire people who can write dialouge well. The ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: You just gotta hang in there.
Heh. That was pretty amazing. I love the main character, and I love the ending, though it is a bit weird that some random guy comes and kisses her. I ...
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: The Book
I really liked this poem, because I could totally understand it. Sometimes books are just so much less complicated than people, and sometimes they are some of my best friends. ...
Apr 15, 2011 -
Re: Wyvern
Troublesome villagers... Wha- ? Oh, yes, I LOVED it! I'm not kidding. The villagers and their stupidness just irks me. My stomach lurched when I got to the end. It ...
Apr 15, 2011 -
Re: My First Date
Oh. My. Goodness. This was amazing ! I am thoroughly impresssed. It was sweet, touching, and portayed the perfect emotions. I loved how they shared the lines, and I loved ...
Apr 10, 2011 -
Re: The Gods play Marbles
Oh, this made me laugh! It was so funny, and really creative! The only things I had a problem with were the quotation formatting, and the dialouge formatting, but I ...
Apr 2, 2011
