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Daisuki

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: the dance of death

    Aww... it's so happy, but so sad at the same time. I really like it. So, I'm pretty sure that the guy got murdered, and she commited suicide to be ...

    Jun 7, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: One Day (contest entry)

    Awww... I really, really loved this! It was so creative how you used your prompt. At first the description of what Blake was doing with the leaf confused me, but ...

    Jun 4, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Dragon Scales

    Nice ending. It was short, and it seemed like an excerpt (did I spell that right?) but it was very nice. Perhaps just a few more really wow words could ...

    Jun 4, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Why am I a Christian?

    I love you. I loved this. It was wonderful, thank you for writing it. It's really hard when some people give Christians a bad rep, I want to say, "But ...

    May 30, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Vulture & Swan

    I know this is for the same contest as my Disgrace to Wolf , but I really did enjoy this piece. I did find the huge spaces to be a ...

    May 30, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Anatomy of a Portrait

    I love this. It was incredibly beautiful, a pleasure to read. I loved the atmosphere of the whole thing. The one part that was confusing was when he drew wings, ...

    May 30, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Mirror: Chapter Two

    I love Callum. As long as he doesn't turn out to be some evil creep, then I'll continue to love him. Call me cliche or whatever, but I can't help ...

    May 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Boy Who Wasn't There

    Hello! I'm back to review this wonderful poem again because, well... I just can't leave it alone. I don't know how legitimate the suggestions I'm going to give you are, ...

    May 30, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Mirror: Chapter One

    Wow. This was really good. I like how the storyline isn't... boring, or common. I mean, sure there's a lot of car crashes, but not every crash leads you to ...

    May 18, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Photos of a Wolf

    Ah, this was reall well done. Your dialouge is very natural, and that's one of the things I struggle with, so I admire people who can write dialouge well. The ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: You just gotta hang in there.

    Heh. That was pretty amazing. I love the main character, and I love the ending, though it is a bit weird that some random guy comes and kisses her. I ...

    Apr 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Book

    I really liked this poem, because I could totally understand it. Sometimes books are just so much less complicated than people, and sometimes they are some of my best friends. ...

    Apr 15, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Wyvern

    Troublesome villagers... Wha- ? Oh, yes, I LOVED it! I'm not kidding. The villagers and their stupidness just irks me. My stomach lurched when I got to the end. It ...

    Apr 15, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: My First Date

    Oh. My. Goodness. This was amazing ! I am thoroughly impresssed. It was sweet, touching, and portayed the perfect emotions. I loved how they shared the lines, and I loved ...

    Apr 10, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Gods play Marbles

    Oh, this made me laugh! It was so funny, and really creative! The only things I had a problem with were the quotation formatting, and the dialouge formatting, but I ...

    Apr 2, 2011


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