Daenyss

Thanks so much! Also, that roast was my favorite thing in this chapter. Roger is kind of a father figure for Lauren, after what happened with her parents, and so ...

Thanks for popping by! All my poems focus on either emotion or being provocative, and sometimes, as in this case, they focus on both! I like challenging society with my ...

nah, this was maybe five minutes. I tend to focus on the emotional and thought-provoking aspects of a poem, instead of going for a single, vivid scene. The line "If ...

Wow, I really needed to answer this all at once, but I'm editing, and so I'm progressing through this and replying back as I get to your comments. The thing ...

Hey! So I went ahead and edited this a little bit. Tristan and Brayden are now kind of their own people, they have this little moment where their characters shine ...

Also, to give a breakdown of their roles in the band: Brayden Austin - lead vocal, rhythm guitar Tristan Wilder - lead guitar, backup vocals Cullen Pierce - bass guitar, ...

Hey, thanks for reviewing again! If you've noticed, I've incorporated some of your suggestions already, and the rest are in progress. I definitely see where you're coming from with this ...

Oh dag nabbit. I accidentally uploaded the wrong chapter. There was a bunch of stuff that happened at the Grammys that was supposed to come before this. I'll work on ...

it's fine! Also, I'm working on trying to find an editor for this piece. If you wouldn't mind helping out, pm me and we can see if we can work ...

Aghhhh! Drama starts next chapter!!!!! I'm so excited. It'll all come out, and I'll do the best I can. Look for long chapters ahead. I see where you're coming from ...

Thanks for coming by again! I promise, the age gap will be addressed soon(think sometime in Chapters 9-10), as well as the entire relationship. It will be heavily stressed. As ...

I meant the sentence about almost nodding and then shaking her head as a response to his question of if she minded if he posted it on social media - ...

You raise some very valid points, and to be honest, most of this is just a result of how I started writing the story. The age difference just happened, and, ...

Thanks for popping by! I definitely see where you're coming from with this one, but I do want to say that this is very much the reunion and honeymoon phase. ...

Thanks for coming back again, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story! First off, I do want to promise that I'm going to address the differences in their relationship, but ...