DaSpetsnaz

I post it, you give it to me.

Daniel, this is my job. :)

Yeah, Daniel came up with that name.

Great poem with a great idea running it. Your spelling was good along with your grammar. Imagery: Good. The words flowed as smoothly as the idea. Keep writing. Tyler.

Like Matt, this is a great poem, but you kind of lost me at the end. Maybe you could fix that? But other than that it's a good poem.

This is a great poem with better ideas. Your spelling is good and your grammar is great. An overall great poem, I really liked it. Keep up the good work. ...

This is a good poem with a great idea. The words flowed smoothly and didn't confuse me, which is good. The spelling is good and the grammar is also good. ...

This was a very good poem for a first draft. Your imagery was great and your spelling and grammar were perfect. You had I great idea and I wouldn't change ...

Your spelling and grammar could really use some work, but other than that it's good. You had a great idea and you explained it well, and I really got the ...

This is a good poem, and it was well thought out, but there were some issues. Like said, some rhymes just didn't fit or were forced. You had a good ...

I believe that you had an excellent beginning. The plot and characters were amazing, but I do have to hold you on one thing. I hate vampires with all my ...

That was a very nice poem. I could really picture everything that was happening because you described it that well. Nice job.

OMG! That was the most hilarious poem I have ever read.

Um, I don't know what to say. That was an outgoing poem, but it kind of scared me a little. You did everything that a poet should, and more.