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My grammar is more terrible than I thought. Mistakes like that are unforgivable, or at least that's how I treat myself. Thanks for paying attention to the plot. The inputs ...

Thanks. I trust in your judgement.

Thanks. I trust in your judgement.

Good night! Thanks for the review. About the abbreviation thing. Microsoft Word didn't like putting a period at the back, so I assumed I'm the one at fault. Darn it, ...

Huh... I didn't think it would be difficult to notice a change in POV. I'll have to explore that a little. Also, I've never heard of such a convention as ...

Thanks for the review. I'm surprised that Dave going back out as a superhero would surprise you, but then again you're going into this a Kick-Ass virgin, so I guess ...

Heh, thanks for all the grammar/language corrections. I'm hoping though that you'd critique the plot, story, narrative, characters and their development more as well. Thanks! :)

Nice! I like how you're spotting some mistakes which I've carelessly missed out in my check-through. Also, don't worry about missing out Kick-Ass 2, because this novel is actually a ...

lol, and certainly not an it! :D

No, I think he changed it upon seeing my comment. It was 22,000 words long. Now it's only as long as you said it is.

Indeed, I've noted that the readers in YWS have a far shorter attention span than in FF.net... I'm glad you like challenges. Just don't forget to enjoy yourself :)

Indeed, it'd be ALOT of hardwork. As of now, there's 23 chapters, or almost 110,000 words. We're not even half-way through, and the novel is far from finished. Chapter 24 ...

Hi... I am The Raven, Squire of The Knights of the Green Room. My recommendation for you is to chop down this chapter into smaller ones. I've ran this chapter ...

Thanks for the review! Man I missed your review! Anyway, thanks. I like how you're showing me your thought process. I wouldn't have known how a reader would perceive my ...

Good news is, you're doing fine. Fanfiction is usually very easy to write. I sailed through 8000 words once when 2000 words is already a problem for me in an ...