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Alright, you're perfectly right about the part where I need shorter sentences. You're not the only one criticizing me for that. I'm getting it from university as well. I tend ...

Nah, you don't have to apologise or anything. Anyway, I happen to have the same opinions as you, as you've discovered in the next part. But you're right, and you've ...

No problem :)

Maybe he's using the brevity of his review to comment on the brevity of your poem? It's actually quite ingenious really. If you're allowed to post a mere few words ...

Short but sweet review. There's a lot of feedback you gave that I could use. Thanks!

Yeah well, I'm just one reader though. There could be a chance I'm just an oddball. At the same time MooCowPoop could be right. In the end, it's your prerogative, ...

Cool, thanks for the review, buddy!

Sure, I'll get to that later. I've ran out of free time :) I'm glad I helped :)

Oh good, that's great. I got worried there when you went 'subscribe and like if you want to find out what happens in chapter 2'. The way you phrased it ...

No problem, buddy. I'm glad I helped.

As usual, this is a very good review! I don't know why, but sometimes the language part of my brain would go full-on schizophrenic haha, resulting in one or two ...

lol, I think you mean The Descent. :D Anyway, I like your feedback about using too many exclamation marks and the part about the 'saw' bit. I'll be sure to ...

Oh man, now that's one feedback to which I've no answer to. The part about Dave covering Mindy's ears... Your argument has merits... But I just don't know what to ...

No complaints and negative feedbacks does not mean that no one has an issue with it. Maybe they're just being courteous, or tolerant. You ought to remember that this is ...

While your review's okay, more or less, your second point is way off. Chapters are divided into parts because 1,500 words is the recommended length of a work here in ...